To be published on September 2015.
Disclaimer: I received an
advance reader's copy of this book directly from the publisher in exchange for
my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own, and no monetary
compensation was received for this review.
(The book is due to be
published on September 2015; review written 31/07/2015)
I don’t usually compare books, but in this case
I’m going to make an exception. I’ve read this volume back-to-back with Erne’s book, and what a difference it was. This is by no means derogatory to
Edmondson’s book. They’re just two simply different takes, aimed at different
audiences. I loved them both for different reasons. This one is a very short
volume, but it’s my kind of book about Shakespeare: It maps Edmondson’s
personal history with Shakespeare. It’s not a “technical” book about
Shakespeare, like Erne’s. It’s much more fluid and down-to-earth:
"This book is written from within my own reactions to Shakespeare, which have grown and developed over the twenty years I have lived, worked, written and taught in Stratford-upon-Avon."
Edmondson poses and answers the question: "In asking how Shakespeare wrote we might turn the question around and ask ourselves: if we wanted to write like Shakespeare, what would we have to do?"
While reading this, I got wondering whether I could also write "like" Shakespeare...
Puck's epilogue is one of my favorite passage
from all of Shakespeare's works. Why? As with Edmondson, it’s all down to our
personal history with Shakespeare (I have one too…). At the British Council,
during our role-playing sessions, my teacher, Vicky Hartnack, made me recite it
over, and over again, until it was as familiar to me as my own reflection. “Owning”
Shakespeare is being able to break it apart, and this is a passage from his
work that will allow me to truly make it also mine. Even though it feels a bit
like sacrilege to change any of Shakespeare's work, I must do it…
For my break/remake, I chose to spin Puck's
epilogue in a different way. Rather than a short monologue directed at the
audience, I changed it into a conversation between Egeus and Puck told in the
format of a (very) short story. Forgive me if it's a bit messy. It’s not easy
to rewrite Shakespeare…
“If we shadows have offended,
Think but this and all is mended:
That you have but slumbered here
While these visions did appear.
And this weak and idle theme,
No more yielding but a dream,
Gentles, do not reprehend.
If you pardon, we will mend.
And, as I am an honest Puck,
If we have unearnèd luck
Now to ’scape the serpent’s tongue,
We will make amends ere long.
Else the Puck a liar call.
So good night unto you all.
Give me your hands, if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends.”
in "A Midsummer Night's Dream", Act Five: Scene One, Lines 440-455
A couple warnings before you read:
Puck is a girl in my retelling. I've always
imagined her that way as I read the play, and it wasn't until I saw MSND on
stage for the first time that I even realized Puck was supposed to be a boy.
While I presented Puck as a girl, this version
of her was largely influenced by Stanley Tucci's portrayal of Puck in the 1999
version of the film.
The dialogue can be a bit odd at times. It's a
mix between modern, formal, and, at the very end, Shakespearean language. It
seemed to flow properly to me, but I'm a horrible judge of my own work, so
don't take my word for it.
In Victorian times, Hyacinth represented
playfulness and mischief.
So, with as much further ado as I can squeeze
out, here is my retelling of Puck's epilogue:
Egeus bolted upright in bed, gasping and clutching at his chest. What a
perfectly horrid dream. Faerie queens in love with asses? Meddling sprites with
magic flowers? A play so terrible it was wonderful? And his daughter, his
precious Hermia, married to that lout, Lysander? Utterly preposterous. “Thank
the gods it was only a dream.” He muttered to himself.
“Ah, but was it just a dream?” A tinkling voice asked from the end of
his bed.
Egeus shouted, startled, and reached for the dagger at his bedside.
“Well that’s just pointless.” The voice said, half-laughing,
half-admonishing. With a loud pop, a young woman appeared on his feet. A
hyacinth crown sat on her curling brown hair, and brilliant hazel eyes laughed
at him above an upturned nose and a perpetual smirk. If he looked closely, he
could just see pointed ears poking through her hair and two small horns holding
up her flower crown. “You can’t even see me if I don’t allow it. What makes you
think I’d allow you to stab me?”
“Who… what are you?” He stuttered out, still grasping the dagger tightly
in his palm.
“I’m offended, my pompous little lordling. Am I forgotten so quickly?”
Another loud pop sounded, and the woman disappeared off of his feet.
Reappearing next to his head, she gave a low bow. “Robin Goodfellow, at your
service. Better known as Puck to my friends. You may call me Robin.”
“Now see here!” Egeus called
indignantly. “I am a man of-“
She waved her hand in his face, cutting off his words. “Pish-posh.
Compared to me, old Methusala himself is a lordling.” She gave a laugh and
popped onto his feet again. Leaning forward over her crossed legs, Robin
snapped her fingers and lit the candles on Egeus’ bedside table. “Now answer my
question, oh arrogant one. What makes you think it was just a dream?”
“What else could it be?” He asked
indignantly, yanking the blankets up to cover his cold chest and causing Robin
to topple backwards on the bed. “My Hermia is to marry Demetrius, or she shall
die. Duke Theseus himself has ordered it to be so.”
“Technically he ordered her to marry a man
who happens to be as equally blind and conceited as yourself, or she’ll be
forced to join a nunnery, but we’ll quibble over semantics later.” She giggled,
righting herself. “Now think, Egeus. If it wasn’t a dream, what could it be?”
“It was nothing. A silly trick brought about by too much wine with
supper. Just like you.”
“Of course. That was a dream. I’m a dream. This is all a dream.” She
grinned, bouncing a little and making the bed shake. “But let’s pretend, just
for a moment,that it wasn’t. Let’s pretend it was a warning.”
“A warning of what?”
“Of what will happen if you don’t let go of your short-sighted need to
have your daughter obey your every whim, and allow her to marry her true love.”
She glanced exaggeratedly from side-to-side. Cupping her hands around her
mouth, Robin whispered, “Just to clue you in, that’s Lysander.”
“I will never-“
“You will, or everything you just dreamed will come to pass.” Robin
interrupted, leaning back on her hands. “Well, maybe not everything. I added in
the part about Titania and the ass just for fun, but the rest of it, yeah,
that’s a warning.
“You caused Theseus to make a decision, near the eve of his wedding,
when he’s madly in lust with his prisoner bride that follows the law but goes
against love. You caused him distress, and, as my king and queen are rather
fond of him, you caused them distress. Stupid move, really, but you mortals
seem eerily proficient at that sort of nonsense.”
Egeus eyed her suspiciously. “Thank you.”
She cocked an eyebrow, giving him a derisive smile. “And to what do I
owe those thanks?”
“This is most certainly a dream.”
“We’re pretending it’s not, remember?”
“You just told me that I’ve angered the king and queen of the faeries by
petitioning the duke to force my daughter to live under my rule. That would
strain even the most inventive man’s imagination.”
“Wait a few centuries.” Robin said dismissively. “At any rate, still not
a dream. I’m real.” She bounced again to prove her point. “I’m here, and your
daughter will marry Lysander, one way or another.”
“One way or another?”
“You have two choices, Egeus.” Robin said solemnly, her smiling dropping
for the first time since she popped into existence on his bedspread. “You can
listen to this warning, allow your daughter to marry Lysander, point Demetrius
in Helena’s direction once you tell him the engagement is off, and, in doing
so, ease the ire of my masters.”
“Or you’ll use a magic flower to make it happen anyway?” He scoffed.
She gave him a pitying look. “Or I’ll use a magic flower to make it
happen anyway.” She confirmed. “Hermia will still marry Lysander. Demetrius
will still marry Helena, not your daughter. You will not get your way, and, by
being so stubborn, you’ll earn the everlasting odium of King Oberon and Queen
Titania. In ordinary circumstances, putting your own wishes above the
well-being of your daughter is a horrid decision. In this case, it may prove
fatal. Most faeries are mischievous, but my masters easily blur the lines
between ‘harmless fun’ and ‘death by donkey.’”
“You’re lying.”
“I am many things, but not a liar.”
“Marrying Demetrius is what’s best for my daughter.” Egeus sighed,
rubbing his forehead. “He’s-“
“Exactly like you,” Robin provided gently, “but he’s not right for your
Hermia. She loves Lysander, and Lysander loves her enough to risk abandoning
his home, lands, and title and hiding away with a dowager aunt as long as it
means he gets to call her his wife.” She shrugged, the smirk slipping back into
place. “Besides, it doesn’t matter if you believe me or not. As I said, this
will happen, one way or another. The only choice you have is whether or not to
allow it to happen with your blessing.
“So,” she popped off the bed again and reappeared holding her hand out
to him, “shall we go wake Hermia and tell her the good news?”
Egeus stared at her, and her hand, reproachfully, before pointedly
turning his head away. Robin let out a long sigh, shaking her head. “So be it.
Since we do not part as friends, this Puck canno’ force amends."
And with a final pop, she was gone.
(Shakespeare's traits: characterisation, dramatic situations, stagecraft and poetic expression are all absent in my attempt...Unlike Bach and Shakespeare, I was never that great at recycling and reinventing other's work...)
When comparing Edmondson to Harold Bloom what
can I say? Bloom is very conservative. He is affirmative to a modern form of
Bardolatry, treats Shakespeare as a Religion, compares Hamlet to David and
Jesus, insists on the curious idea, that Shakespeare did invent the modern
concept of personality, he dismisses the work of Stanley Wells in a rude manner
and is although merciless with Peter Brook and every sort of Feminist or
postmodern Interpretation. Who can withstand the verdict of an angry old man?
Nobody. But I really appreciated his judgment regarding "Merchant".
Edmondson's take is all about the journey: "Shakespeare's language inspires actors to portray a heightened reality, which in turn invites the audience to accompany them on a powerful emotional journey. We know whenever we arrive at a theatre to watch a Shakespeare play that, for the better part of three hours, something significant is about to unfold [ ]."
"No one owns Shakespeare, though anyone can experience a sense of ownership of him." This essentially means that Shakespeare is the conduit through which we can better understand ourselves.
When a balanced account of Shakespeare’s work comes along, like this one by Edmondson, I’m always delighted.